Publisher: Maria Pare Publishing
List Price: $2.99
Cover Price: $12.99
Sadly though, the other elements just don't stack up nicely on that foundation and fail to create a great book. To avoid being overly harsh or negative, let's do this as quickly and as factually as possible. The overall narration and the conversations read as monotone (more like a report than a story). The characters were cliche, and though there was an editor named, there were so many errors it became frustrating to read.
In the end, Palo had a fantastic story to tell that feels as if it was molded to fit a cookie cutter shape of a medical mystery. Possibly, as this is Palo's debut novel, it's just a matter of more time and experience that's needed. Either way Palo has a great imagination that, combined with more creative writing knowledge and more writing from the heart/gut, will take her far.